Kia Ora Bloggers! This week in Te Ngahere we have been doing some writing. Paihia School is competing in a 100 Word only Challenge with Australian Schools. The teachers gave us a starter introduction for us to know what to do and then we got to create a story from it using only 100 Words! I was learning to limit how many words I use in one story while still making it good quality. Here is mine.
The noise had disturbed me, i’d shot upright in bed. After taking a breath, I leapt onto the smooth boards of my floor and had a peek… What I saw surprised me. A glowing ball was singing a weird song. A Creepy Melancholy Tune? Then the ball rushed away from me as I flew through the roof. I looked down to see a man with a knife. I felt my back and surprisingly pushed my hand through a gaping hole. Everything rushed through my head. Beep! Beep! Beep! What… Uh Oh! I’m Late for school! Mom Will be so Mad!
I think I did well when I was trying to make it scary without too much creepy parts in my story. Maybe next time I could make my story with my characters nightmare being real. I can’t wait until we do our real stories! What would your story be about? Blog you Later!
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