I’m Dani, one of the blog commenters for the Kaikohekohe cluster of the Summer Learning Journey. It’s awesome to see that you are back participating in the Summer Learning Journey again this year! Well done on completing so many posts! I can’t wait to read them all very soon.
Well done for creating an interesting haiku poem! I can see you have made sure that you have used the right number of syllables. Did you know the middle line is the line that is meant to have seven syllables? That’s okay though! I like your poem how it is, it’s a twist on a haiku. Have you written many poems before this? I didn’t teach poetry last year but I do want to teach my students poetry this year! Keep up the awesome work!
Kia Ora Jack,
ReplyDeleteI’m Dani, one of the blog commenters for the Kaikohekohe cluster of the Summer Learning Journey. It’s awesome to see that you are back participating in the Summer Learning Journey again this year! Well done on completing so many posts! I can’t wait to read them all very soon.
Well done for creating an interesting haiku poem! I can see you have made sure that you have used the right number of syllables. Did you know the middle line is the line that is meant to have seven syllables? That’s okay though! I like your poem how it is, it’s a twist on a haiku. Have you written many poems before this? I didn’t teach poetry last year but I do want to teach my students poetry this year!
Keep up the awesome work!
Blog ya later,
Dani