In Te Maunga we were listening to this book called "Ghost" Whaea becks told us that we had to write an idea of what would happen in the next book because the book ended with a cliffhanger! ( a cliffhanger is where a story ends with one word like BOOM... ) Here is my writing
Boom!!! I zoomed off like a “LIGHTNING BOLT!!”I was so distracted in winning that I didn’t realize that I was ahead of everyone! I could here my Mum yelling, “Come on ghost & you can do this!!” And I COULD do this!!” I could see my Aunt Sophey nearly screaming her head off!! “COME ON CASTLE GO GO GO!!!!!!” And my cousin king holding up a sign that said “Castle Cranshaw ain’t no JOKE” But the only person I couldn’t see was Coach. I searched everywhere around me but no luck then everything started to go downhill! I started to fall back behind everyone and slow down and then it hit me, I was running and then I tripped over a rock, A ROCK!!Then the race finished and i came in second, so not bad for someone who lives on Glass Manor, Then something surprised me Brandon the first place winner gave me his GOLD medal!! ( Witch I nearly had a heart attack from )And it was then that it happened, Brandon yelled THIS BOY STOLE MY MEDAL, but everyone knew he was lying because they knew he gave it to me so i just rolled my eyes and threw the medal on the ground, because who needs a silly old medal? After a ruff day I finally found coach in his cab looking at a photo, ( the photo that I found in the boot when I was cleaning his cab ) and he was crying, Ghost, do you ever miss your father? He sobbed. “Sometimes,” I replied. Well I do, he whispered and maybe I could sometimes visit his grave and you could come with me. And that’s when I bolted, I didn’t wanna go to some persons grave I don’t really even know, do you? Well i just ran until my legs couldn’t run no more. I finally got to Mr Charles store and got some seeds and waited...
Waited is the last word for mine and it is a cliffhanger!!