On Monday March the 26th Te Ngahere started writing poem drafts about ourselves. We weren’t allowed to use because and like because it was a poem not a piece of random writing. We were using metaphors to explain our poems. I think on my new published poem I could make it better and add more detail. If you have anything to ask me about my poem just put a comment down below and i’ll be sure to get back to you as soon as I can.
Here's my poem
Jack is…
Jack is a Minecraft character creating his spectacular world in any way he can
Jack is a Chest opening up to store new Info
Jack is a tiny little pohutukawa shrub seeking knowledge from the other elegant trees
Jack is a special pasta, delicious and strange
Jack is a charming shapeshifter always ready to take a new form
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