(My Mum said I might be the next Stephen King)
Abandoned War
Dusty dirty boards.
Covering the windows.
The scream of a little girl.
Like someone getting shredded
Flickering chandelier.
Giving out creepy shadows
The smell of rat dung.
Super stinky
Stuck in an abandoned apartment
The creaky elevator creepily putting on music.
Every 5 minutes
Hoping that someone will save me.
Look out the window and there it is
A war going on through the darkness
Tnt blowing up houses.
Townspeople being taken as hostages
Tanks rolling over cars.
Destroying hundreds of buildings
This one next.
Falling down to the ground from the window.
Dead
The crying of people.
Just seeing the dark lid on the coffin
My funeral.
Floating away from earth
Seeing heaven.
Landing on the cloud
Seeing long lost ancestors.
The smile on my face
Looking out for the children of earth.
Loving every single one of them
By Jack Andrews
This is my second one
Abandoned Lab
Dusty dirty boards.
Covering the windows.
The scream of a little girl.
Like someone getting shredded
Flickering chandelier.
Giving out creepy shadows
The smell of rat dung.
Super stinky
The creaky elevator creepily putting on music.
Every 5 minutes
The cackle of a mad scientist
Falling through a hole in the floor
Landing in a transparent tube
Broken glasses
Different coloured liquid
Lab coats
Marble floor
Very dusty computer
Protective goggles
Door opening
Sound of a phone hanging up
Old man walking into the room
Wrinkled eyes
Revolting lab coat
Cracked safety goggles
Sand
Suffocating
Dead
By Jack Andrews
Hope you liked it!!
Kia ora Jack,
ReplyDeleteIt’s Izaiah. I really enjoyed reading your room writing. It was very descriptive and creepy. You did a good job of painting a picture in my mind. I know it’s a draft but you forgot to put full stops in some sentences. Besides that your writing was very detailed and cool.
From Izaiah.
Thanks for the reply Izaiah and just saying that my writing was not a draft
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