Hello Jack, I am Vitaraag. This Acrostic Poem is the best one I have ever seen. My favorite one is gift from god. Maybe next time you could use words that relate to the southern lights.
Well done on creating a post that is appealing to the eye! I think it is awesome that you have gone through the effort of putting your acrostic poem on top of this beautiful picture of the Southern Lights, kai pai! I really love the describing words you used, such as stupendous and incredible, but to be rewarded with the full marks you will need to include some words in the poem that is to do with the Southern Lights. For example you could write L - Lovely colours from the Auroa. You can just change your poem like that and post it in the comments below. Let me know if you need any help :)
Hello Jack,
ReplyDeleteI am Vitaraag. This Acrostic Poem is the best one I have ever seen. My favorite one is gift from god. Maybe next time you could use words that relate to the southern lights.
Vitaraag
Kia ora Jack,
ReplyDeleteWell done on creating a post that is appealing to the eye! I think it is awesome that you have gone through the effort of putting your acrostic poem on top of this beautiful picture of the Southern Lights, kai pai!
I really love the describing words you used, such as stupendous and incredible, but to be rewarded with the full marks you will need to include some words in the poem that is to do with the Southern Lights.
For example you could write L - Lovely colours from the Auroa.
You can just change your poem like that and post it in the comments below. Let me know if you need any help :)
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Blog you later!
Georgia E