What an excellent poem you have constructed, It is a well written piece. You have really done a great job of talking about the main points that you learnt about China’s air pollution. I really enjoy the questions you have placed in your poem, ‘Why is it smoggy?’ and ‘What will happen when there is too much smog?’. This really makes the audience think about the issue and what will happen if it becomes much worse?
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ReplyDeleteWhat an excellent poem you have constructed, It is a well written piece. You have really done a great job of talking about the main points that you learnt about China’s air pollution.
I really enjoy the questions you have placed in your poem, ‘Why is it smoggy?’ and ‘What will happen when there is too much smog?’. This really makes the audience think about the issue and what will happen if it becomes much worse?
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Georgia E